"One more thing Sunny, Why didn't you add an extra line " I sat beside a b**ch on the first day of college. ""

I exclaimed, "Sky, I know you are pointing at Lacy but she wasn't the one who sat beside me on that day. "

Lacy didn't listen thankfully, otherwise another civil war would start. Although he made fun of my writing it gave me points where I could improve upon. Actually I was writing an article on "My First Day of College. ".

I don't know whether my writing is potential enough to win against others and occupy a place amongst the writing panel of the web magazine but I definitely won't give up without trying. I edited and re-edited the writing and focussed on the parts he emphasised intentionally or unintentionally. Snow was having fun by having her lunch. I still didn't get the reason why most of the days Sky doesn't bring his lunch. It worries me like h.e.l.l but still do not have enough guts to ask him. As the time pa.s.sed cla.s.ses continued. In fact there was an extra mathematics cla.s.s. Lacy bunked the cla.s.s. I and Sky and few others stayed. For this reason I caught the next train and reached home late. I made up my mind to complete the task on that day itself. I wrote and re-wrote and finally sent Sky a message. I wrote, "If it's convenient for you can you please review my writing? "

"Send it, I will review it. It might take time but I will definitely review yours.By the way, is reviewing necessary? "

"No It's your wish. I asked for your help only to honestly tell me how you feel. "

"Okay"

I sent him the mail where I sent the doc.u.ment. I was thrilled to see his reply .He texted, "I found it very interesting, especially the Annie and Lucy part. Send it to the committee and chill just like your father said to cool down... On a serious note, It's really good. "

The last line was the best. And I had gained my confidence to submit the paragraph. I texted, "Thanks a lott... "

His reply was like a prince wis.h.i.+ng, by texting, "My Pleasure. "

But one thing I was confident that he read everything. His comment proves it. This gave me an urge to submit the main file. I submitted it and finally got relieved. But I was tensed about the selection. I really want my little writing to be showcased. But I was still afraid that It might get rejected. Whatever be their wishes I hope a little s.p.a.ce is still left for the story to be published. Afterall It's a matter of our hardwork together!