Huh... It's not easy, finally I almost finished the first volume of "Yanyu Chapter", although the number of words was much more than expected, it took 750,000 words to end a country.

Personally, I am moderately satisfied with this volume, which meets my most basic requirements.

That is to say, all the pits dug can be filled, and all that should be explained clearly, and the story line of each character is basically completed.

In the original idea of the Yanyu chapter, it was divided into two parts.

We talked about the encounter between Vivian and Xiao Hei, and then to the internal testing of the players, then to Shirley, and finally, it ends with the arrival of Fallen Abyss, Vivian vs Shirley, and the arrival of Vulcan.

Then the second half is about the story in the Fire Code City, about the treasure thief group, about the Earl of Sisle, about Liz and Elina, and about the hidden main line of the real book.

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Self-reflection, the reason why this volume is too long is that the author wants to write too many characters, but the balance is not good.

For example, in addition to the protagonists Vivian and Liao Zixuan, the secondary characters are Shirley, Liz, and Elina.

The lines corresponding to the three are the Fallen Abyss, the Blood Race, and the Winter Witch Organization.

Shirley talked about how to be rescued by the protagonist from the disaster of the Fallen Abyss, how to join the protagonist group as the first, how to grow up, and how to become a "quality inspector".

Liz is talking about how the standard "princess in distress" story was rescued by the protagonist and embarked on the road of revenge and redemption.

And Elina, as the author said at the time, is an extremely important character. She can be said to be one of the important factors connecting the following "Thousand Islands", and it is also one of the introductions to the main line of the book.

In fact, it is not difficult to find that the above are all in the ranks of "cannon fodder NPC", and it is under the "development" of the protagonist that their fate has been changed.

Then again the secondary characters, Damir, Chris.

One is about going from a fool who is only obsessed with magic and does not care about the world, to a mature young man who can shoulder the burden of the flame domain and inherit the archbishop of Vulcanism.

The other is about street gangsters who changed their minds, and after recognizing the darkness of the underground forces, fought bravely and embarked on another road of behind-the-scenes heroes.

Shirley and Liz were under the influence of Liao Zixuan.

Damir, Chris, and Alina are under Vivian's influence.

There are also players interspersed in the middle, interspersed with the world view to pave the way... Hey, thinking that I can put so many things together and finish writing, it is also worthy of applause.

For the personal expectations of the next volume "Thousand Islands", the first point is to reduce the characters, simplify the story, and end the inspiration in 300,000-400,000 words.

Moreover, the author of this article will fix the perspective on the protagonist a lot, and the introduction and unveiling of the first volume has been laying the groundwork in the later stage, which is the main thread that will run through the whole book.

At the same time, I will absorb the problem that this kind of foreshadowing chapter of changing maps was too dry when it transitioned from the top to the bottom of the flame domain.

The author is going to do the whole big job as soon as the "Thousand Islands" comes up!

Just like the current writer level of "White Crit" has been upgraded from Lv1 to Lv2, I will try my best to show the writer's progress in "Thousand Islands"!

Finally, I would like to thank everyone who has supported Cannon Fodder Witch all the way. Thank you! I saw that there were several family members who voted almost every day, but never pulled it down for a day. I was really touched, thank you!

Today is the last day of February, and I still have a useless request for leave. It's not a pity, it's about to expire, so...

After the testimonials at the end of the volume, quietly ask for a leave!

Just to sort out the plot of the Qiandao chapter!

Hope hxdm approves, Arigado!

(Fuck, thank you in the front, and ask for leave later, right? What rubbish!)