[25]

O ever in my lonely walk

erased MS. (1).

In lonely walk and noontide dreams

MS. (1).

O ever when I walk alone

erased MS. (1).

[26]

I feed upon that blissful hour

MS. (1).

I feed upon that hour of Bliss

erased MS. (1).

That ruddy eve that blissful hour

erased MS. (1).

[26] dwell] feed MS. (2).

[27]

we [*sate*]

When midway on the mount I stood

MS. (1).

When we too stood upon the Hill

erased MS. (1).

[29]

The Moonshine stole upon the ground

erased MS. (1).

The Moon [*be blended on*] the ground

MS. (1).

[30] Had] And erased MS. (1).

[31] was there] stood near (was there _erased_) MS. (1).

[33-6]

Against a grey stone rudely carv'd, The statue of an armed Knight, in She lean'd [*the*] melancholy mood, [*And*] To watch'd the lingering Light

MS. (1).

[33-4]

[*She lean'd against*] a [*chissold stone*]

[*tall*]

[*The statue of a*]

MS. (1).

[34] the] an MS. (1) [Stanza 10, revised.]

[37] sad] soft MSS. (1, 2). doleful] mournful erased MS. (1).

[39] An] And MS. (2).

rude] wild erased MS. (1).

[41-4]

With flitting Blush and downcast eyes, In modest melancholy grace The Maiden stood: perchance I gaz'd Too fondly on her face.

Erased MS. (1).

[45-8] om. MS. (1).

[49] [*I gaz'd and when*] I sang of love MS. (1).

[53-6]

With flitting Blush and downcast eyes and With downcast eyes _in_ modest grace for [*She listen'd; and perchance I gaz'd*]

Too fondly on her face.

MS. (1).

[55] And] Yet MS. (1).

[57] told] sang MS. (1).

[59] roam'd] cross'd MS. (1).